Hm..not bad.
It almost goes to a place where I can start bobbing my head, but there's a lot drums and not enough music to back it up. Reason 4 is a pretty cool program, but writing melodies in it can still be a b*tch. I liked the song more and more as it progressed. I would turn the drums down a little and maybe structure the song a little more. Keep it up though, you could be onto something pretty good.